我更新我的資料. 另外，我建議在這周三9/21系務會議，請其他同仁修正

我更新我的資料.
另外，我建議在這周三9/21系務會議，請其他同仁修正自己的資料較妥當.

結果 (英文) 1:

I update my data. In addition, I suggest that in this 9/21 Department meeting on Wednesday, others modified his earlier order.

結果 (英文) 2:

I update my profile.
In addition, I recommend that the Department of the executive meeting Wednesday 9/21, invited other colleagues to modify their data compared properly.

結果 (英文) 3:

I update my information.In addition, I suggest that the 9/21 Department affairs meeting this Wednesday, please other colleagues to amend their own information is appropriate.