As is depicted in the picture above

As is depicted in the picture above,the men,sitting on a chair,says,"I have a note from my doctor saying that i'm allergic to criticism."the other men ,beside him ,are speechless.The drawing reflrcts the phenomenous of people couldn't accept others' criticism. Odd and funny though it sounds,but we can't help feeling how seriouusly the "allergic"hsa impacted on people's work style.
Accepting others' criticism is the necessary step to do something big.It also helps people enhance their competence in many aspects.such as :gaining experience and studying skills.On the contary ,those who don't accept others' crotocosm canned be success ,because no one is perfect and nobody needn't studying.
To sum up ,as university student ,we ought to learn as much knowledge and grsah as many skills as we can.At same time,it seems to me that we should accept other criticism.Only in this way we can succes.

結果 (英文) 3:

正如上面所示，人坐在椅子上，说，“我有一张从我的医生说我过敏的批评。“其他的男人，在他旁边，无话可说。绘图reflrcts人的现象不能接受别人的批评。虽然听起来奇怪有趣，但是我们不禁感觉如何seriouusly“过敏”HSA的影响着人们的工作方式。接受别人的批评，是做大事的必要步骤。它还可以帮助人们提高他们的能力在许多个方面：获得经验和学习技巧。相反的，那些不接受别人的crotocosm罐头是成功的，因为没有人是完美的，没有人不需要学习。总之，作为大学生，我们应该学习更多的知识和技能，我们可以grsah很多。同时，我觉得我们应该接受别人的批评。只有以这种方式我们才能成功。