On the other hand, 我具備亞洲的生長背景、西班牙的交

On the other hand, 我具備亞洲的生長背景、西班牙的交換留學的經驗，再加上若能順利錄取UIUC則我將更能拓展美國的商業觀察及及專業技能。我的優勢及在MSTM所獲得的專業技能及與國際學生溝通的訊聯，家能讓我在國際市場有莫大的幫助。

結果 (英文) 1:

On the other hand, I have a background of growth in Asia, the Spanish exchange students experience, coupled with the admission that the successful UIUC then I will be better able to expand the business and professional skills of observation and the United States. My strengths and expertise in MSTM obtained and communicate with international students in Pacific Link, home make me great help in the international market.

結果 (英文) 2:

On the other hand, I have an Asian background, Spanish exchange study experience, plus if I can successfully accept UIUC I will be able to expand business observation and professional skills in the United States. My strengths and the professional skills i gained at MSTM and the communication with international students, home can let me in the international market has a great help.

結果 (英文) 3:

On the other hand, I have the growth background in Asia, the experience of exchange and study in Spain, and if I can successfully enroll UIUC, I will be able to expand the business observation and professional skills in the United States. My advantages and professional skills acquired in MSTM and communication union with international students can help me greatly in the international market.