感謝主，我終於大學畢業了！雖然已過而立之年才得到這學位，與求學順利的人

感謝主，我終於大學畢業了！雖然已過而立之年才得到這學位，與求學順利的人相較之下，我整整遲了十年。
回顧兩年來的求學日子，交錯於事業與學業中，終將劃上休止符。回顧這注滿苦澀、充實、忙碌與溫暖的學習時光， 除了老師們實用有趣的授課內容外，讓我收獲最多的是，結識了來自各產業菁英的 40 位認真學習、彼此扶持的同窗，為 我寫下學習生涯中如此璀璨的一段。

結果 (英文) 2:

Thank God, I finally graduated from college! Although thirties before they get this degree, studying under and smooth compared to people, I am over a decade later.
Recalling the past two years of school life, career and staggered to the school, will eventually put a full stop. Looking back filled with bitter, full, warm and busy learning time, in addition to teachers teach practical interesting content, I gain the most is to get to know the 40 seriously study and support each other's students from each of the industry elite, I learn to write so bright career section.

結果 (英文) 3:

Thank God, I finally graduated from college! Although it has over thirty years of age to get this degree, and study successful person compared with me for ten years too late.Looking back over the past two years of school days, staggered career and academic, will be the end of the rest. Review this filled with bitter, full, busy and warmth in the time of the study, in addition to the useful and interesting teachers teaching content, let I harvest most is met from the industry elite of 40 serious study, support each other classmates, I write down learning career so bright a.