Here is your paper with our suggestions, shown using Word’s change tracking and with bold or coloured font. This is so that if you turn off the tracked changes, the suggestions still appear as bold text, and may be easier to follow.
We suggest that authors include a sentence in the cover letter to the journal along the lines of “This paper has been edited by a native English-speaker with a higher degree in a relevant discipline”, as this can help reduce negative comments about the language.
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