我想我很幸運，原因有兩個。On the one hand, 我所期望奉

我想我很幸運，原因有兩個。On the one hand, 我所期望奉獻的領域並不受地區限制，在這國際化的社會，全球各地電商都致力於拓展國際市場….。On the other hand, 我具備亞洲的生長背景、西班牙的交換留學的經驗，再加上若能順利錄取UIUC則我將更能拓展美國的商業觀察及及專業技能。我的優勢及在MSTM所獲得的專業技能及與國際學生溝通的訊聯，家能讓我在國際市場有莫大的幫助。

結果 (英文) 1:

I think I was lucky, for two reasons. On the one hand, I expect dedication of the field is not subject to geographical restrictions, in this cosmopolitan society, electricity providers around the world are committed to expanding the international market ... .. On the other hand, I have a background of growth in Asia, the Spanish exchange students experience, coupled with the admission that the successful UIUC then I will be better able to expand the business and professional skills of observation and the United States. My strengths and expertise in MSTM obtained and communicate with international students in Pacific Link, home make me great help in the international market.

結果 (英文) 2:

I think I'm lucky for two reasons. On one hand, the field I expect to contribute to is not limited by the region, in this international society, e-commerce companies around the world are committed to expanding international markets.... On the other hand, I have an Asian background, Spanish exchange study experience, plus if I can successfully accept UIUC I will be able to expand business observation and professional skills in the United States. My strengths and the professional skills i gained at MSTM and the communication with international students, home can let me in the international market has a great help.

結果 (英文) 3:

I think I'm lucky for two reasons. On the one hand, what I hope to contribute is not limited by regions. In this international society, e-commerce all over the world is committed to expanding the international market . On the other hand, I have the growth background in Asia, the experience of exchange and study in Spain, and if I can successfully enroll UIUC, I will be able to expand the business observation and professional skills in the United States. My advantages and professional skills acquired in MSTM and communication union with international students can help me greatly in the international market.