现在我上了大学，已经成年了，可以照顾好自己，自由的时间也比以前多，钱的

现在我上了大学，已经成年了，可以照顾好自己，自由的时间也比以前多，钱的问题也可以自己慢慢解决。所以我制定了我的旅行计划，我最大的目标就是去西藏，我想我会用一年左右的时间准备，期间去比较近的地方锻炼，我相信我的计划一定会实现的！

結果 (中文) 2:

Now I go to university, has grown up, I can take good care of yourself, free time much more than before, the problem of money can also slowly resolved.So I have made my travel plans, my main goal is to go to Tibet, I think I will take a year or so to go somewhere near, during the period of exercise, I believe that my plan will be realized!