There is an analysis of the industr

There is an analysis of the industry and reflection on the skills needed for the role.

However there is a myriad of grammatical and punctual errors that detract from the writing. Incorrect wording is also evident.

The word 'disdain' has been misused in the sentence: 'I am interested in the field, will invest one hundred percent of the energy and dedication, and give disdain efforts to achieve high standards, to achieve their goals.'

The word disdain means to feel that someone or something is not worth someones effort or respect. This clearly is not the word that was meant to be used here. Improper punctuation is also evident here.

An example of how this sentence could be made better with proper punctuation would be:

'I am interested in the field where i will invest one hundred percent of my energy and dedication. I would also invest all my effort to ensure that i achieve the high standards needed and meet the required goals.'

You are also lacking a balanced reflection of strengths and weaknesses. Two paragraphs of strengths and one sentence on weaknesses is not balanced.

結果 (中文) 1:

还有分析行业及思考作用所需的技能。不过是无数的减损写作的语法和守时的错误。不正确的措辞也是显而易见的。不屑一词已经被滥用在这句话: '我很感兴趣的领域，将投资百分百的精力与奉献，和给不屑努力达到高标准，以实现他们的目标。Word 不屑意味着，感觉到某人或某物是不值得有人努力或尊重。这显然不是注定要在这里用这个词。不当的标点符号在这里也是明显的。这句话如何可更好地与正确运用标点的一个例子就是 ︰' 我很感兴趣地将投资百分百的精力和奉献精神的领域。我也会投资我所有的努力，确保实现所需的高标准，并满足所要求的目标.你还缺乏均衡地反映的长处和短处。两个段落的长处和弱点的一句不是平衡的。

結果 (中文) 3:

有一个行业的分析和反思所需的技能的作用。然而，有一个无数的语法和准时的错误，有损于写作。不正确的措辞也很明显。“不屑”一词被误用在句中：'我对该领域感兴趣，将投入百分之一百的精力和奉献精神，并给予不屑的努力，达到高标准，实现自己的目标。”这个词的蔑视意味着觉得某人或某事是不值得别人的努力或尊重。这显然不是用来在这里使用的词。不恰当的标点符号在这里也很明显。这句话可以用适当的标点符号来做的一个例子：“我对我的精力和奉献精神投入了百分之一百的领域感兴趣。我也会尽我所能，以确保我达到所需的高标准和满足所需的目标。你也缺乏一个平衡的力量和弱点的反映。两个段落的长处和弱点的一个句子是不平衡的。