. The paper has interesting results

. The paper has interesting results that the community will appreciate because the single-frequency laser with the wavelength of 397.5 nm and perfect beam quality as well as the long lifetime is important resource for the available quantum internet. The grammar however needs to be improved before publication. For example:
1) “The optical coupler composed of two lens (f1 and f2) and a HWP (HWP2) not only ensures the mode-matching between the injected laser beam with the external enhancement ring cavity but also align the polarization of the injected fundamental-wave laser to satisfy the requirement of the frequency doubler” is clumsy.
2) In the paper, the author should distinguish “the frequency doubler” and “external enhancement-cavity”; for example, (EOM), which can be utilized to lock the frequency doubler to the injected fundamental-wave laser via the PDH method.
3) “In the experiment, the nonlinear conversion coefficient of the MgO:PPSLT crystal was firstly measured by;
4) “because the external enhancement cavity is difficult to locked on the top of its transmission peak”
2. The stability of the fundamental-wave laser directly influences that of the obtained 397.5 nm laser. The author should give the stability of the fundamental-wave laser.
3. The obtained is useful for the quantum internet. The intensity noise characteristic should be given in the paper.

結果 (中文) 1:

.本文有有趣的结果，社会将会升值，因为单频激光器的波长 397.5 nm 和完美的光束质量以及使用寿命长是重要的资源可用量子互联网。语法但需要进行改进后才能发布。例如︰1)"HWP (HWP2) 不仅保证外部增强环形腔注入的激光束之间的模式匹配和光耦合器组成的两个镜头 （f1 和 f2），但也对齐激光偏振特性的注入基波频率倍频器的要求"是笨拙。2） 在文件中，作者应区分"倍频器"或"外部增强型腔";例如，(EOM)，可以用来锁定到通过 PDH 方法注入的基波激光倍频器。3）"在实验中，MgO:PPSLT 晶体的非线性转换系数首先测定了;4）"因为外部增强腔很难在其透射峰值锁定"2.对基波激光的稳定性直接影响着获得 397.5 nm 激光。作者应该给基波激光的稳定性。3.获得的很有用的量子互联网。本文，应给出强度噪声特性。

結果 (中文) 3:

。该文件有有趣的结果，社会将欣赏，因为单频激光与波长为397.5纳米和完美的光束质量，以及长寿命是可用的量子互联网的重要资源。然而，在出版前需要改进的语法。例如:1）“由两透镜的光学耦合器（F1和F2）和产品（hwp2）不仅保证了模式匹配注入激光与外部加强环腔也将注入的基波激光偏振满足倍频”要求是笨拙的。2）在本文中，作者应该区分“倍频”和“外部增强腔”；例如，（EOM），它可以用来锁倍频的注入基波激光通过PDH方法。3）“在实验中的MgO的非线性转换系数：首先测定PPSLT晶体；4）“因为外部增强腔很难锁定在其透射峰的顶部”2。基波激光的稳定性直接影响到所获得的397.5纳米激光器。作者应给予基础波激光器的稳定性。三.所得到的是有用的量子互联网。应给出的强度噪声特性的文件。