雖然愛舍能降低學生犯錯的機率，但我覺得如果能改善處罰方式，一定能讓宿舍

雖然愛舍能降低學生犯錯的機率，但我覺得如果能改善處罰方式，一定能讓宿舍生活變得更好。

結果 (英文) 1:

Although love homes can reduce the chances of students make mistakes, but I think if we can improve the punishment, must make dorm life for the better.

結果 (英文) 2:

Although Aise can reduce the chance of students making mistakes, but I think if we can improve the punishment, we can certainly make dormitory life better.

結果 (英文) 3:

Although love shed can reduce the probability of students making mistakes, but I think if we can improve the way of punishment, we can certainly make dormitory life better.