Soon after she moved near me in Chi

Soon after she moved near me in Chicago,we became friends.One day on our way home,she started smoking.I asked her why and she told me how she first started.I told her she should spend more time on her studies,not just to be cool but to make her parents worried to make herself clever,to make herself feel better and,most of all,to get a good education .
I stayed with her every second,throwing away her cigarettes every time she went for one.Soon she stopped smoking.
One day I happend to see her smoking again.I told her she needed to choose between a friend and cigarettes.We didn't talk for two days.Then she finally called and said she would never smoke again.
Now it's only been a few months,but she is doing better and doesn't smoke.

結果 (英文) 2:

不久后，她靠近我，在芝加哥，我们成了朋友。有一天，在回家的路上，她开始抽烟。我问她为什么，她告诉我她第一次开始。我告诉她，她应该花更多的时间在她的研究，不只是要冷静而使她的父母很担心让自己聪明，以使自己感觉更好，最重要的是，找到一个好的教育。
我和她在一起的每一秒，扔掉她的香烟每一次她去的。很快她停止吸烟。
一天我偶然看到她再次吸烟。我告诉她，她需要选择一个朋友和香烟。我们没谈过两天。然后她终于打来电话，说她不会再抽烟了。
现在过了几个月，但她做的更好，不抽烟。