我是個很有組織架構能力的人，並且也善於跟人溝通，我也在大三修了資料分析

我是個很有組織架構能力的人，並且也善於跟人溝通，我也在大三修了資料分析的課程而我相信這在未來絕對用的到，知道貴校的商學院是很不錯的，因此希望可以老師合作發表一篇關於我自己所做的研究的成果出來，相信這對貴校也是有好處的。

結果 (英文) 1:

I am a very organized architecture capable people, and also good at communicating with people, I also built a junior course materials analysis and I believe that this is definitely used to in the future, know your school business school is very good, it is desirable the teacher can co-authored a study on the results of my own doing, I believe that this is also good for your school.

結果 (英文) 2:

I am a very organizational structure ability, and also good at communicating with people, I also took a data analysis course in the junior year and I believe that this is absolutely used in the future, know your school's business school is very good, so I hope that teachers can cooperate to publish a study of my own results out, I believe that this is also good for your school.

結果 (英文) 3:

I'm a very organizational person, and I'm also good at communicating with people. I also took a course of data analysis in my junior year. I believe it's absolutely useful in the future. I know that your business school is very good, so I hope that teachers can publish a research result about my own work. I believe it's also good for your school.