Other minor comments are (1) how do we measure hyperparasitaemia and what is the rationale for including this one? (2) And using “acidosis” instead of “acidotic”; (3) And page 5 item #20, what is “agonal”? If not entirely necessary we can just omit I guess. [KaKiu Ho] Helen please check the above and fix. It seems hyperparasitaemia is not in protocol so shall not be collected unless added.