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The sentences impressed me deeply. Many of us have great dreams,but seldom make efforts to make them come true. Actually daydreaming can’t help us go anywhere. We will never get what we want without woricing hard.
Take Thomas Edison for example. In order to make the light of the electric lamp last longer,he did experiment after experiment. Though he failed many times,he kept on trying until he finally succeeded. That is why he said “Genius is one percent inspiration,ninety-nine percent perspiration.”
So whoever wants to achieve his dream must put his dream into action and keep on trying.