我認為這樣的修改是適當的另外有另兩項更動同樣需要妳的協助附件中以紅色標

我認為這樣的修改是適當的
另外有另兩項更動同樣需要妳的協助
附件中以紅色標示出來的被認為是重複的內容
可能需要被消除

此外 第11頁follow up period的圖表中 第9個月也會有hospitalization的分析
如下圖所示
再麻煩您修正
謝謝您的大力協助

結果 (英文) 1:

I believe that such a modification is appropriate
and another assist two other modifiers need you the same
attachment marked in red are considered duplicate content
may need to be eliminated

Furthermore chart on page 11 follow up period of 9 months there will be analysis of hospitalization
shown below
to bother you correct
Thank you for your gracious assistance

結果 (英文) 2:

I think such a change is appropriate.
There are two other moves that also require your assistance.
Content marked in red in the attachment is considered duplicate

May need to be eliminated
In addition, there will also be an analysis in the 9th month of the chart of the follow up period on page 11
As shown in the figure below
Trouble you again to fix Thank you for your great assistance.

結果 (英文) 3:

I think such a change is appropriate
There are two other changes that also need your help
What is marked in red in the attachment is considered to be duplicate
May need to be eliminated
In addition, the 9th month in the chart of follow up period on page 11 will also have the analysis of hospitality.
As shown in the figure below
Please fix it again
Thank you for your help