Ezra Pound将动态的“横” 译作静态的方向介词“to” ， 也

Ezra Pound将动态的“横” 译作静态的方向介词“to” ， 也没有获得原诗以动衬静、 动静相映成趣的语境效果。在许渊冲的译诗中，“green mountains”与white water相对， “the northern sky” 与“The eastern town” 相对， 体现了原诗的对比关联；将动词“bar” 和“gird” 在词态上和“横”“ 绕” 保持一致， 再现了原诗以动衬静、 动静结合的修辞关联。Amylowell与Ezra Pound均将“ 绕” 译为动词“wind” 的现在分词“winding”， 与之相比， “gird” 不仅在词态上更接近于原诗“ 绕” 的词态，而且在意义上更为丰富， 除了“环绕”之意，还蕴含“佩带， 装饰”之意， 更容易激发译文读者的联想。

結果 (英文) 1:

Dynamics of Ezra Pound "horizontal" static translation direction of the preposition "to" no poetry in lined in the same quiet, static and dynamic contouring of contextual effects. On Xu yuanchong's translation, the "green mountains" relative to the white water, "the northern sky" and "The eastern town", associated with the contrast reflects the original poem; the verb "bar" and "gird" on the word State and "cross", "around the" consistent reproduction of the original poem to static and dynamic and static lined associated rhetoric. Amylowell and Ezra Pound are will "around" translation for verb "wind" of now participle "winding", and of compared, "gird" not only in Word State Shang more close Yu original poems "around" of Word State, and in meaning Shang more rich, except "around" of meaning, also contains "wearing, decorative" of meaning, more easy inspired translation readers of Lenovo.

結果 (英文) 3:

Ezra Pound the dynamic horizontal translation static direction prepositions "to" and without the original poem to dynamic contrast static and dynamic contrast contextual effects. In Xu Yuanchong's poetry translation, "green mountains and white water relative," the northern sky "with the eastern town relative, reflecting the original poem contrast Association; the verb" bar "and" grid "in the state and" horizontal "" around "consistent, reproduction of the original poem to dynamic contrast static, static and dynamic combination of the rhetorical relations. Amylowell and Ezra Pound, will be "around" the verb "wind" present participle "winding", and compared, "grid" not only in the word state closer to original poem "around" the word state, and in the sense of the more abundant, in addition to "wrap around" meaning, it also contains "wear, decoration" and easier to stimulate the readers of Lenovo.