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It is a pleasure to hear from you and I can feel the desire to join your school deep inside myself. Although McCallie may be judged differently because it is a boy school but this is has never make a difference to me. I believe being in a boy school will help me to engage with the community better as well as make more friends. From all the research I did on your school, I did see a big similarity between me and students you are looking for.

The three codes McCallie values the most are honor, truth and duty, have also been my life code as well. From the experience I gain from the time being the leader of Histar soccer club, I become a very honorable person. Talking about soccer, I didn’t hear much about McCallie’s soccer team thus I believe my experience will help your school team improve into a higher level.

Furthermore, your school’s core beliefs have also seen eye to eye with me that I can see your campus is very academical, loving, respectful and equal. And these are exactly what drew me to McCallie and made me have a strong desire to become one of the members of McCallie’s community.

I also noticed that your school has achieved myriads of achievement in several subjects while my research on your website and I am very looking forward to have a chance to show my talent such as playing magic tricks and music performance to achievement some goals during my high school years.

All in all, all of the three crucial elements have undoubtedly make me have a even stronger desire to join your community and share my every exciting moment with you in McCallie.

結果 (中文) 3:

我很高兴能收到你的来信，我也能感受到你内心深处的渴望。虽然麦科利可以判断不同，因为它是一个男孩的学校但这是从来没有改变什么。我相信在一个男孩学校会帮助我与社会更好地接触，以及结交更多的朋友。从我在你学校的所有研究中，我看到了我和学生之间的一个很大的相似性。最有荣誉的三码麦克凯利值，真相和责任，也成为了我生活的代码以及。从我的经验，从中获得暂时的3.足球俱乐部的领导，我是一个非常值得尊敬的人。谈到足球，我没有听到太多关于麦科利的足球队，因此我相信我的经验将帮助你的学校团队提高到一个更高的水平。此外，你的学校的核心理念也看见我，我能看到你的校园很学术，爱、尊重和平等。而这些正是吸引我麦克凯利让我有一种强烈的欲望去成为一个社区成员的麦科利。我也注意到你的学校已经实现了多学科的成就无数而在您的网站上我的研究，我很期待有机会展示我的才能如玩魔术和音乐成就我在高中里的一些目标。所有的一切，所有的三个关键因素无疑让我有了更想加入你的社区和你分享我的每一个精彩瞬间麦克凯利。