223 | May 9, 2016, 4:43 PM | amberH

223 | May 9, 2016, 4:43 PM | amber
Hi guys, this week we're ON THE PHONE!
You are to share a paragraph on a "problem you had on phone."
Before you submit the message here, make sure you exchange what you write with a chosen partner.The partner has to check on your "spelling, tenses, grammatical errors, unclear meanings." Make sure your partner understand your paragraph. Add your partner's name at the end of your own paragraph, this shows your partner is the helper for your writing.

Your paragraph should include the following information,

What kind of phone problems you have had?
- not able to understand?
- the person had thick accent?
- the signal was weak?
- money and numbers were included?
- the person spoke too fast?
- wasn't able to identify who the person was / what the purpose was?
- etc..
Who was involved?
What was the call about?
What confused you the most from this call?
How did you get it clear?
How did you deal with this difficult call?

*A paragraph means it's a whole thing with several full sentences, do not write it in separately as it should be a paragraph with a "topic sentence" as the first line, "supporting sentences" as the following sentences and a conclusion sentence as the last one.

Have Fun! The more you try, the more you learn~ :)
-amber

*I'll be back here again before too long!!

結果 (繁體中文) 1:

223 |2016 年 5 月 9 日，4:43 下午 |琥珀色嗨夥計們，這個星期我們在電話上了 ！你是要分享一段關於"在電話有的問題"。你提交的郵件在這裡之前，請確保你交換你所寫的與所選擇的合作夥伴。合作夥伴有檢查你"拼寫、 時態、 語法錯誤，不清楚的意思。請確保你的伴侶瞭解你的段落。在您自己的段，由此可見你的伴侶是你的寫作幫手末尾添加您的夥伴的姓名。你的段落應包括以下資訊，你有什麼樣的手機問題？-不能理解嗎？-有著濃重口音的人嗎？-信號很弱？-錢和數位都包括在內呢？-那人說話太快嗎？-不能確定誰人 / 目的何在？-等......所涉及的是誰？電話是關於什麼的？什麼讓你困惑最從這個電話？你怎麼它清楚？你是如何處理這個困難的電話的？* 一段意味著它是幾個完整的句子整件事情是做不寫，它分開作為它應該被一段與"主題句"作為第一行，"支援的句子"下列句子和作為最後一個結論句。玩得愉快！你越努力，你學的越多 ~:)-琥珀色* 我會回到這裡之前再次太長!!

結果 (繁體中文) 2:

223 | 2016年5月9日，下午04:43 | 琥珀
嗨，大家好，本週我們在手機上！
你要分享一個段落在“你對手機上。問題”
之前，你在這裡提交信息，請確保你交換你所選擇的合作夥伴partner.The寫什麼必須檢查你的“拼寫，時態，語法錯誤，不清晰的含義。” 請確保你的伴侶了解你的段落。在你自己的段落的末尾添加你的伴侶的名字，這說明你的伴侶是你寫作的幫手。您的段應包括以下信息，你有什麼樣的手機的問題？-無法理解？-這個人有濃重的口音？-信號弱？-金錢和數字都包括在內？-這個人說得太快了？-無法確定誰的人是/目的是什麼？-等？誰參與是什麼關於呼叫？是什麼讓你感到困惑，從這個電話？最你是怎麼得到它清楚了嗎？您是如何處理這個棘手電話？*一個段落意味著它有幾個完整的句子，一個整體的東西，不要把它分開來寫的，因為它應以“主題句”作為第一線的一段，“配套的句子”為下面的句子和結論句的最後一個。有樂趣！你嘗試的越多，你越學〜:) -amber *我將不久再次回到這裡！