寫給我家孩子的故事，文筆沒很秀，大家看看吧，希望會喜歡，獻醜了◉ⅴ◉✨

寫給我家孩子的故事，文筆沒很秀，大家看看吧，希望會喜歡，獻醜了◉ⅴ◉✨歡迎意見———————————————————————————過去名為「艾維瓦」的土地上以永耀女神「艾莉希斯」為首，帶領其子民「光之民」與來自奈落深淵的「黑龍」，兩股勢力，因為三觀的不同，而引發戰爭的戰亂時代而戰爭進行到了最後，女神耗盡了生命，黑龍則被打回了奈落深淵，這場戰爭就此平息了下來就在女神將死之際，為了繼續引導子民，秉持著慈愛及犧牲奉獻的精神，祂化作一道曙光飛向了天空，籠罩世界的黑影也隨之驅散—太陽曆《常世永耀傳》Ps喜歡給個♥

結果 (英文) 1:

My child wrote the story writing did not show it, we look at it, hope will like, incompetence ◉ⅴ◉✨ welcome comments
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past
land called "Yiwei Wa" in

order to Eternal Bright goddess "Ailixisi" led people to lead the "light of the people"
and Naraku from the abyss, "Black Dragon", the two forces because different three Views of the war caused the war era

and the war in the end, the goddess of life exhausted, the Black Dragon were beaten back Naraku abyss, the war has quieted down

in the occasion of the goddess of the dead, in order to continue to guide the people, uphold the spirit of love and sacrifice and dedication, and He turned into a dawn fly to the sky, the shadows enveloped the world also will disperse

- the solar calendar, "Shi-Chuan Never Ends"

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結果 (英文) 2:

Write to my family's children's story, writing is not very show, we look at it, Hope will like, give ugly v. ✨ welcome comments
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Past
Land named "Aviva"

Led by the goddess "Alice" in Yongyao, leading his son, the People of Light
And from the depths of the "black dragon", two forces, because of the difference between the three views, and triggered the war era of war

At the end of the war, the goddess ran out of life, and the black dragon was beaten back into the abyss, and the war subsided.

Just as the goddess was dying, in order to continue to guide the people, uphold the spirit of love and sacrifice and dedication, He turned into a dawn to the sky, the shadow of the world was dispersed

- The Solar Calendar, "Chang Shi Yongyao"

Ps likes to give a ♥.

結果 (英文) 3:

The story written to my children is not very well written. Let's have a look. I hope I will like it. I've made a fool of myself ◉ V ◉ ✨ welcome
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Past
On the land called aveva
Led by elixis, the goddess of eternal glory, led his people, the people of light
With the "black dragon" from the nailuo abyss, the two forces, because of the difference of the three views, lead to the war era
At the end of the war, the goddess exhausted her life, and the black dragon was beaten back to the abyss of nailuo, and the war died down
Just as the goddess was about to die, in order to continue to guide the people and uphold the spirit of love and sacrifice, he turned into a dawn and flew to the sky, and the shadow of the world was dispelled
- Sun calendar "eternal glory of the world"
PS likes to give ♥