My quick observations:
There are a few clashes. To get thin enough you may need to use double-sided tape instead of screws for attaching the PCBA to the display. Additionally, will those large connectors be populated in production or are they just for debug? We’d like to maintain a minimum of 1mm to any PCBA component and .75mm to any other part of the display.
You will need thinner FPC connectors for the TP.
You will likely not be able to use FPC connectors at the edge of the board instead of ACF.