I’ve now read your revised versions. Other than the suggestion to engage with Thielicke in journal entry #1 (which you’ve done very well with), I think you still consider what I wrote up last Friday. In addition to those comments, you may wish to engage a little bit more with Grenz and Pinnock and explain what the main lines of their methods are (so that I know you know them) while also explaining in more depth why you’re choosing not to engage with them closely in your reflections. Hope that makes sense.